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:bulletgreen: GH Chapter09- Reunion- Page01 (Preview) :bulletgreen:


Aw hell, let's just give you guys an advance preview. What's the point waiting? :D


*Darkspeeds falls asleep and gets ready for another 5 days of work at the casino starting tomorrow =' ( XD*


Jason if you're reading this I will do my best to get the website content ready by mid-October!! ^^;


Kind regards,

Elson 'Darkspeeds' Wong


P.S. To all the fans curious about how GRAND HUNTER is going to be published in the future - it will come in sets of chapters (or issues if you would like), each chapter contains 22 pages of content (all done in FULL COLOUR!) before proceeding with the next chapter. This will allow me more opportunity to push more stories out instead of a 200 page epic - that's literally impossible to do from a practical point of view.


Stories will, in a lot of cases, be combined into 2-4 chapters to give it some depth. Should it reach 4 chapters then a proper graphic novel of 100 pages in full colour is possible. That is my aim from the printing aspect of it.


P.P.S I would LOVE to hear some feedback on the colouring work. Is this the kind of quality where you would be more than happy to fork out your money for? Let me know on the comments page. Thanks!


P.P.P.S Just one last thing to point out! I'm particulary proud of the saturation levels and colour scheme on this page, I'm really improving on my colouring work aren't I? Well there's much more to learn folks! I hope to keep it up to standard. ;)


EDIT! - Thanks to :icontessadafox: I've adjusted Fei's body proportion in the upper body (i.e. his chest). It looks much better now, thanks a lot Tessadafox!
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

I'd like to start with the colors on this because I think it's one of the biggest strength of this piece. It really helps the page come alive, and that's a big plus in general.

From an overall viewpoint, the details on both the characters and the various stuff in the background is very nicely done along with the shading. You really did a great job with the overall scenery too.

I have to agree with Chibi-Twich about making the line in the middle a bit thicker because at first glance I got a little confused on which panel was which until I looked a bit closer.

That's about all I can think of in terms of my critique, so apologizes if it's a bit short since Chibi-Twich pointed out a lot of stuff already and didn't wanted to try not to be as repetitive as possible comment-wise.