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Chapter08 Pre-Sketches PART02 by darkspeeds Chapter08 Pre-Sketches PART02 by darkspeeds
Ashworth explains his new powers called Nature's Synthesis - an advanced ability in alchemy! He uses what's called Black Flame magic to initiate it.

Love that first panel on the last page to PART02 of this Chapter08 Pre-Sketches series. :D

I also like how I made Ashworth look confident and not too cocky! Ruby is like... "Wow....!" :giggle:


Oh and BTW...


That's a Wombat... Wom-BAT! Get it? Ha ha ha! Okay you can stop the sarcastic laugh now.
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Sorain26 Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2008  Student General Artist
lol, I love the monster's reaction.
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SONICJENNY Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
love the panel aready i can't wait to see what ask say as well as ruby lol. looks like ask is going to have his ass lol
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EA-Firestorm Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
were'd he get the baseballbat? XD
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EvyCrystal Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Professional General Artist
nice nice

wow that funny didn't work out Elson XD
I think just reading that it didn't, was funny XD Wombat XD

your a dork XD

nice job on this dude ^_~
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JiaYueHoneyJade Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Katiefoxe:I thought as much... Ashworth using his trust black flame magic bat XD! Sorry I couldn't help my self, anyways great work! =^^=

Flint: YEY AND NO ONE CAN BEAT KATIEFOXE IN BATTLE NOT EVEN ASHWORTH!!!!! *shaking arms in the air*
Katiefoxe: Flint do ya want me killed!?!?! *glares at Flint*
Flint: I'm off!! *runs off*
Katiefoxe: ^^; 'I'm so dead'
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Zeraphalanx Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
Veros: Yo there Wombait. 8-)

Ash: What the hell! For the last freaking time I'm a Wombat!:X

Veros: Whatever you say Wombait. :)

Ash: :angered:
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randomlyd Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
Lawl, ^o^
Though i must say...His hand on one of the last panels looks a bit..stiff..*hides behind rock*
Sorry, i ahd to be a road kill Dx
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sanderg Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist Photographer
wow it's crushed with just another wom-bat? xD funny!
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KentaruZ Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Professional Writer
the last page is fantastic x3
all the expressions are amazing =D
That Ash is incredible xD
loves the axe's design, sad it was broken xD
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UzumakiSonic619 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
Oh. My. God..........ASH IS EDWARD ELRIC!!! WITHOUT THE METAL PARTS, PANTS, KICK ASS HAIR, AND COAT!!! :iconedwardelricplz:
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f3ng Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008   Filmographer
Like the layout and the general line quality, nice dynamics as well.

hehe Wombat
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks Feng. :) The action sequences will begin in the next few pages. ;)
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f3ng Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008   Filmographer
looking forward to it Elson.
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artistafrustrado Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
cool chapeter sadly theres no speech boob/bubble this time XD

:rofl: wom-bat what sh***y joke...but is a lot of times better than the ones of my classmates & familly jokes XD
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
:giggle: It'd be interesting to know some example of jokes your classmates and family make back home.
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EliseBellatrix Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
I got in time the joke... What a bad one Elson! XD There must be some kind of virus that makes tell bad jokes. You don't know how many of them I'm hearing these days... *sight* :D

BTW, where is that bat coming from??? XXD
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
It's coming out of his ass I think! O.O;; *SHOT* XD

Nah it's made from his Black Flame magic which can store elements and materials within it. He heats them up and makes them into a compound of some object - whatever he can make with within his limit and creativity. *thumbs up*
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EliseBellatrix Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
It's coming out of his ass I think!

He he! Confirmed. It's a virus. Yesterday I heard from phrases like that one, too...
:unimpressed:

Hmmm Ash's Black Flame Magic is very useful as I see, and I have the feeling that we are going to see the unexpected from it! ;)
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SoftMonKeychains Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Professional Traditional Artist
Hehehe, I remember these ones :nod:
Awww Ruby get impressed so easily, I bet that the wombat got more in his sleeve (he has no sleeves first at all, lol)
You know what is the major surprise there? Larcel is expressive, XDDDDDDDDDD!!
Truly, I thought that it is just a big empty tusk without brains like any monster but he seems to be smarter than appears!
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah it was going to a hard decision on whether to keep him non-expressive or expressive type. But at the end I went and experimented with adding some emotion to him and it worked well. :)

But I will add the exception that you will rarely see him expressing himself so stronger as displayed on the last panel of the last page presented here.
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Frobman Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008   Filmographer
This another caption page thingie? Okay then:

R: Squeel! We're gonna get axed! And we all know axes are the most powerful thing in this story!
A: That's not true! There's one thing...
CLANG
R: AAAAH!!! It's the legendary Nightstick of Policemen of old!!!!
A: Actually, it's the Ludicrous Metal Bat of the 10 year old kid Down the Block.
The idea came after he had barbecued vegetables and rice, as he was staring at the weird blue flame, he was struck by inspiration! After reading lots of comic books, he tried melting metals together, and lacing them onto his lucky baseball bat! He later found out that the bat was too heavy to carry...
R: Wow! That's some dumb kid!
A: Only one as strong, courageous and good looking as me can lift this. And use the powerful alloy inspired by comic books to his advantage!!!
R: WOW! Bats beating axes!!! Never thought I'd see the day!
A: YEAH!!! Break people's spirits by breaking conventions ridiculously!!!
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
"Legendary Nightstick of Policemen of old!"

Man that's a new one. :) For some reason I'm reminded of the good old fashion days of cat burglars and Sherlock Holme era of police and detectives... I don't know why. O.O;; XXD

Thanks for the entertaining fill in the captions coming straight from your own creativity Frobman! :D
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Frobman Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008   Filmographer
Cos that's when they had little limit on who to beat up with their nightsticks?

You're welcome! I'd like to thanks Whose Line Is It Anyways? UK version, which I was watching at the time of writing. Good show to watch for Improvisation comedy!
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Kimmi-suTT Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Feel the ALMIGHTY power of the Wombat!!!

Home Run BITCHES!!!
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Emily-Young Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Filmographer
PS in panel 1 on page 1 looks like Ruby's saying : AH!!! WE'RE GONNA DIE! WE'RE GONNA DIE! WE'RE GONNA DIE!

XD Oh well, she looks freaked out anyway.XD
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Emily-Young Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008  Hobbyist Filmographer
Whoa!!!! HE BROKE IT!:jawdrop:
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Sithking-Zero Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2008
(First Page)

R: DARKSPEEDS?!? WHYYYYYY DO YOU HURT US WITH YOUR "WOMBAT" PUN?!?!? WHYYYY????
A: Don't worry about it... I'LL KILL HIM FOR THAT!!!

Even your own characters can't appreciate puns. XD

Third Page:

A: So YOU'RE GOIN' DOWN!!!
(Axe Shatters)
A: Guh...
R: Ashworth...? You okay?
A: AXE SHRAPNEL... IN... FLESH!!! EEEEEEYYYYYYOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!
Skull dude: Ha ha ha, How the HELL you wombats got so advanced without inventing any sort of armor baffles me. Heck, PANTS would probably help a little!
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darkspeeds Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Ha ha! I wonder what Ash will look like with pants on... :) Nah he refuses to wear any. :D
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Sithking-Zero Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2008
This explains it- the Wombats aren't hated for their near-xenophobic attitudes, they're hated for the fact that they won't freaking cover up! And honestly, if they all have bodies as toned as Ash's, than the reaction of everyone else- total jelousy- would be rampant amongst the other nations.

It all makes sense... XD
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