The Grand ASHWORTH Fortune: Volume 01, Chapter 04 - Duke Vienna vs. Stream The Hawk
Format: Western, reading from LEFT to RIGHT
More action comin' at ya.
What I like about this particular page is that it shows how strong Duke really is in his power strokes with the sword. This is evident with Stream's thoughts presented as a visual and verbal medium through panels 1-3.
Stream shows signs of weakness on the first panel, underestimating Duke's regular strength. The second panel features a shakened hand - imbalance and lose of focus... The third shows intimidation and fear from Duke's expression.
Anyway get ready for another move from Stream besides his trademark CURSE magic 'control type' attack.
Duke sure has an advantage with his strength. I really love how you portrayed this in panels 1-3 and is the biggest strength of this page. The shading is really well done, and I like how the expressions came out as they fit with the action scenes really nicely.
Oh man that panel of Duke in the top right corner gives me chills.....O_O Scary~ But so friggin awesome!! His expression never changes either! Stream may be in over his head....or will the tables be turned? This is really exciting!! @__@ Must...know...what happens...next...!!! Amazing work, Elson!! ^^
I-I-I-I don't know who to cheer for! *spaz* I like the top right pannel and the bottom right pannel!
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"What if you slept? And what if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And what if, in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower?And what if, when you awoke, you had the flower in your hand?"
Whoo! Way to go Duke! Way to show them what you're made of!
Just remind me to never cross you and TRAP!
Heheh. It's interesting here how you portrayed this. Stream seems a little like he was over-confident... may that be a downfall? More so, it opens your reader's mind to exactly how much hidden power your characters may have hidden.
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Lapse in logic scare me. Please talk sense so as not to overload the deviant posting above.
So coooooool! Cant wait to see the next page to see what's going to happen
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In this cold hearted world we have, never think that giving it your all is enough........no matter how hard you try its never enough -- Im broken like a glass shattered from 1000 feet above.......is there no one who can fix me?
Devious Comments
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So COOL!!!!
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I'm special and not in a good way
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funga fu fu...............................
GO DUKE!!!!!!!!!
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*spaz*
I like the top right pannel and the bottom right pannel!
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"What if you slept? And what if, in your sleep, you dreamed? And what if, in your dream, you went to heaven and there plucked a strange and beautiful flower?And what if, when you awoke, you had the flower in your hand?"
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Sonic: Wow tails you just took that guy in the back and made him your geisha!"
Tails: yes and now i'll go and smoke my pipe of satisfaction
Guity gear anoucer: Destroyed!!!
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I love Satoshi Hiwatari! =^^=
~Satoshi-lovers
Just remind me to never cross you and TRAP!
Heheh. It's interesting here how you portrayed this. Stream seems a little like he was over-confident... may that be a downfall? More so, it opens your reader's mind to exactly how much hidden power your characters may have hidden.
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Lapse in logic scare me. Please talk sense so as not to overload the deviant posting above.
I forget to favorite after I comment. DX
I'm Moustafa in DA's Paper Mario 1 Crew!</a
Cant wait to see the next page to see what's going to happen
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In this cold hearted world we have, never think that giving it your all is enough........no matter how hard you try its never enough
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Im broken like a glass shattered from 1000 feet above.......is there no one who can fix me?
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